Help with short composition for my Japanese class.?

Question:

hello every one i had to write a composition for my japanese class and i wrote about nara park and the deer there. could u please look over it and correct any silly mistakes or bad grammar? it is not very long thanks you for you help:

奈良公園は入る時に初めに鹿がたくさんいることに気がつきました。約１２００鹿が… 鹿の面白い事は、ビスケットをあげたら、頭を下げておじぎしました。とってもびっくり…

What I'm trying to say:
When i entered Nara park, the first thing you notice is that there are alot of deer. There are about 1200 deer. these deer have been designated a nation monument. the interesting thing about these deer is, when i gave them a biscuit, they lowered their heads and bowed. i was very surprised. Although these deer are used to people, they are very hungry. Therefore, it is not okay to bring food. The deer will bother the people with food.

Answer:

I can only see part of the japanese writing. you need to break them up for them to be shown in the page.