Is this a reasonable Japanese translation?

Question:

"Tell me that your sweet love hasn't died." (From Always on My Mind - Elvis Presley)

あなたの甘い愛が死んでいないことを教え、教えてください

A response from a native or competent Japanese reader/writer would be greatly appreciated.

Arigato.

Answer:

僕に言って　君の甘い愛は死んでいないって

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"Tell me, tell me that your sweet love hasn't died"
--> This line is the "hook" of the song, so "tell me" is possibly emphasized with adjustment to the melody. Lyrics often use "repeating the same phrase at the hook" actually.
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