How do you say this in Japanese?

Question:

How do you say:

"In Japanese schools wearing makeup is not allowed, but in my school it is allowed."

"In Japan you do not tip waiters, but in America you can tip people."

"In japan high school students can not have a part time job, but in America high school students can have a part time job."

Answer:

"In Japanese schools wearing makeup is not allowed, but in my school it is allowed."
日本の学校では化粧は許可されていませんが、私の学校では許可されています。

"In Japan you do not tip waiters, but in America you can tip people."
日本ではウェイターにチップをあげませんが、アメリカではあげます。

"In japan high school students can not have a part time job, but in America high school students can have a part time job."
日本では高校生はバイトできませんが、アメリカの高校生はできます。
(But it's not true. High school kids can have part-time jobs in Japan)