What do I sound like in Japanese?

Question:

I am aspiring to become fluent in Japanese, and need some opinions as to how I sound. Please listen to one or more of the videos located at the link below and let me know what you think I need to change, what i'm doing good, and what you just don't like.

http://www.youtube.com/iveydasmarty

Answer:

Not so bad.

I would not say what you have to change only after listening to this one song.