Sunday, December 11, 2011

Doing a report on Hiroshima & Nagasaki, need help with intro?

Question:


Doing a report on Hiroshima & Nagasaki, need help with intro?
Does anyone have a good idea for the introduction sentence? I want to say something about deaths/long term effects in a interesting way. Not just blah blah so and so many people died it was horrible, that's boring because its just stating facts. Im not good with adjectives, so . . . . help?

Answer:


>"I want to say something about deaths/long term effects in a interesting way?"

What kind of report is that? There should be no way to write about 400.000 victims (at least) in Hiroshima and Nagasaki in "interesting way." I am sure the more you know about the victims, the more you realize the cruelty of the nuclear bombing.
It is not "interesting." No Way!!

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