Question:
Any help is truly appreciated. My japanese is not so efficient, so if there are any mistakes or perhaps something sounds weird, please say so!
去年の夏、私はりょうしんと友達といっしょにニューヨークに行きました。町の中で…
私のいとこのけっこんしきのあとで、かんこうに行こうと思っています。ちずをしらべて…
Thank you in advance !
Answer:
Your sentences are cut off in the middle. You have to put a break (using Enter key) to show all.
But on the given part, your essay is perfect!
Addition:
Actually, your article is nearly perfect although it's better to use more kanji to look like more sophisticated.
>きれいなドレス買っておかなくちゃいけません！
きれいなドレスを買って....
This is the only mistake you made.
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